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::Mike, good points. I actually misread the "grossly" statement (or mis-remembered how it was used when typing the comment above). On closer inspection, I have no qualms with how you've used it. In general I like the article as is. These are probably more nit picks than anything serious, but a couple more thougths: | ::Mike, good points. I actually misread the "grossly" statement (or mis-remembered how it was used when typing the comment above). On closer inspection, I have no qualms with how you've used it. In general I like the article as is. These are probably more nit picks than anything serious, but a couple more thougths: | ||
::#I ''Page of quotes on race.'' I like your idea of putting together a statements on race from church leaders. One idea would be to do a separate page of all positive/progressive quotes, and then address a few negative quotes on this page. The reason for this approach would be that the purpose of this site is probably not to advertise the negative/embarassing quotes. Of course a strong reason against this approach is that it would be less forthright. So I'd probably vote for a page with a few representative negative quotes, and a few positive/progressive quotes. | ::#I ''Page of quotes on race.'' I like your idea of putting together a statements on race from church leaders. One idea would be to do a separate page of all positive/progressive quotes, and then address a few negative quotes on this page. The reason for this approach would be that the purpose of this site is probably not to advertise the negative/embarassing quotes. Of course a strong reason against this approach is that it would be less forthright. So I'd probably vote for a page with a few representative negative quotes, and a few positive/progressive quotes. | ||
::#''Old Testament examples.'' I like this argument in the post. I'm a little worried a skeptical reader would think that a belief such as the world being flat is an unoffensive believe whereas a racist belief is offensive, so your example is comparing apples to oranges. A more biting example might be something like [http://feastupontheword.org/1_Sam_15:3 1 Sam 15:3] where the prophet Samuel tells Saul to kill women and children (see the discussion page there for some brief discussion, links and thoughts on this). However, I think it would take a fair amount of work to incorporate this in the write up, and I'm not up to the task right now (and like I said, I think this is a fairly minor complaint). | ::#''Old Testament examples.'' I like this argument in the post. I'm a little worried a skeptical reader would think that a belief such as the world being flat is an unoffensive believe whereas a racist belief is offensive, so your example is comparing apples to oranges. A more biting example might be something like [http://feastupontheword.org/1_Sam_15:3 1 Sam 15:3] where the prophet Samuel tells Saul to kill women and children (see the discussion page there for some brief discussion, links and thoughts on this). However, I think it would take a fair amount of work to incorporate this in the write up, and I'm not up to the task right now (and like I said, I think this is a fairly minor complaint). | ||
::#''Rewording of Joseph Smith's comment.'' I tried to slightly reword the paragraph that linked to the JS comment, but I think I overdid it. With the previous wording I was worried that a reader would miss the emphasis about ''other Christians'' holding such beliefs, so I tried to emphasize this by contrasting to JS's comments to other Christians (as opposed to other Mormons who held these beliefs). I'm not happy with the rewording I did, so I'm hoping someone will improve on it. | ::#''Rewording of Joseph Smith's comment.'' I tried to slightly reword the paragraph that linked to the JS comment, but I think I overdid it. With the previous wording I was worried that a reader would miss the emphasis about ''other Christians'' holding such beliefs, so I tried to emphasize this by contrasting to JS's comments to other Christians (as opposed to other Mormons who held these beliefs). I'm not happy with the rewording I did, so I'm hoping someone will improve on it. | ||
::#''Line upon line reference.'' My sense is that most Christians have a different reading of this phrase from [http://feastupontheword.org/Isa_28:10 Isaiah 28:10] (the link is to a Feast wiki discussion on this issue, mostly taken from a blog post by Kevin Barney). So I added a reference to the BOM scripture which uses this phrase in the way I think it was intended. | ::#''Line upon line reference.'' My sense is that most Christians have a different reading of this phrase from [http://feastupontheword.org/Isa_28:10 Isaiah 28:10] (the link is to a Feast wiki discussion on this issue, mostly taken from a blog post by Kevin Barney). So I added a reference to the BOM scripture which uses this phrase in the way I think it was intended. | ||
::#''Not make them into radicals.'' I think a counterargument to this point is that prophets are often radical in a spiritual sense (which is why so many of them were killed!). I understand the point of this paragraph, but I think somehow it should be reworded to emphasize the spiritual nature of a prophet's calling, as opposed to a politically-charged calling. Of course this is a whole new can of worms which I think is somewhat controversial amongst Mormons as well as Christians more generally. (One example is Liberation Theology which I think ties Christian teachings to political agendas. Also, I think one reason the Jews didn't accept Christ as the Messiah is b/c he didn't have a political agenda like they interpreted the scriptures to have. And of course JS did run for President. Like I said, a can of worms....) | ::#''Not make them into radicals.'' I think a counterargument to this point is that prophets are often radical in a spiritual sense (which is why so many of them were killed!). I understand the point of this paragraph, but I think somehow it should be reworded to emphasize the spiritual nature of a prophet's calling, as opposed to a politically-charged calling. Of course this is a whole new can of worms which I think is somewhat controversial amongst Mormons as well as Christians more generally. (One example is Liberation Theology which I think ties Christian teachings to political agendas. Also, I think one reason the Jews didn't accept Christ as the Messiah is b/c he didn't have a political agenda like they interpreted the scriptures to have. And of course JS did run for President. Like I said, a can of worms....) | ||
::#''BOM misinterpretation.'' Should racism in the BOM be addressed on this page? or on some other page? A good article by [http://www.fairlds.org/FAIR_Conferences/2003_Charge_of_Racism_in_the_Book_of_Mormon.html John Tvedtnes] discusses this issue, I'm just wondering where we're planning to go with the race and cultural pages on this site, and if there's an appropriate place to address this issue (or if the [http://www.fairlds.org/apol/ai086.html race and cutural issues] page at FAIR is sufficient). | |||
::If you can't tell, it's easier for me to critique and comment then to actually write something constructive, sorry! --[[User:RobertCouch|RobertCouch]] 17:28, 30 Jun 2006 (MDT) | ::If you can't tell, it's easier for me to critique and comment then to actually write something constructive, sorry! --[[User:RobertCouch|RobertCouch]] 17:28, 30 Jun 2006 (MDT) |
First, the link from the template to FAIR site doesn't seem to work for me (missing the www prefix I think).
Second, I think the discussion about the views of McKay and Benson regarding Civil Rights and Communism should be improved. Mainly, I'd drop the word "grossly" since I think it's conceding a bit too much to say that these statements were grossly racist (racist from today's perspective, yes, but not grossly so and not racist from their perspectives...).
Third, I came across this pro-black statement by Joseph Smith and was wondering if it'd be worth incorporating or linking to in the article (perhaps a simple statement to the effect, "to be fair, many Church leaders also made several progressive racial statements"):
Since I'm so new here and still getting a sense of the way articles should be written, I'm a bit shy about making any of these changes myself, at least without at getting some feedback first.... --RobertCouch 19:36, 29 Jun 2006 (MDT)
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