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Criticism
A revival is not mentioned in Joseph Smith's 1832 First Vision account. Since this detail does not show up in the narrative until the 1838 'official text' it provides evidence that the First Vision story evolved over time to become more elaborate and add dramatic elements.
Source(s) of the criticism
Richard Abanes, One Nation Under Gods: A History of the Mormon Church (New York: Four Walls Eight Windows, 2003), 16-17.
Response
Critics of Joseph Smith claim that no revival is mentioned in the 1832 First Vision account because the actual word 'revival' - or something similar - is not found within the text. But they have failed to notice a distinct pattern of words that demonstrate otherwise.
7 March 1832
- On 7 March 1832 (just a few months before Joseph Smith penned his 1832 First Vision account) some Mormon missionaries in Pennsylvania were saying that during Joseph’s youth he had repented of his sins but was “not attached himself to any party of Christians, owing to the numerous divisions among them,” and so he resorted to prayer (The Fredonia Censor, vol. 11, no. 50, 7 March 1832).
September - November 1832
- "from the age of twelve years to fifteen I pondered many things in my heart concerning the sittuation of the world of mankind the contentions and divi[si]ons the wicke[d]ness and abominations and the darkness which pervaded the minds of mankind my mind become excedingly distressed for I become convicted of my sins . . . . I cried unto the Lord for mercy for there was none else to whom I could go and to obtain mercy"
December 1834
- During "the 15th year of [Joseph Smith's] life" there was "a great awakening, or excitement raised on the subject of religion" in Palmyra, New York and its "vicinity."
- There was "much enquiry for the word of life"
- "in common with others, [Joseph Smith's] mind became awakened"
- "For a length of time the reformation seemed to move in a harmonious manner"
- "but, as the excitement ceased . . . a general struggle was made by the leading characters of the different sects, for proselytes"
- "Large additions were made to the Methodist, Presbyterian, and Baptist churches"
- "Then strife seemed to take the place of that apparent union and harmony . . . and a cry—I am right—you are wrong—was introduced"; "all professed to be the true church"
- "In this general strife for followers, [Joseph Smith's] mother, one sister, and two of his natural brothers, were persuaded to unite with the Presbyterians"
- This circumstance gave Joseph "further reflection"
- He received "strong solicitations to unite with one of those different societies"
- But "seeing the apparent proselyting disposition manifested with equal warmth from each, [Joseph Smith's] mind was led to more seriously contemplate the importance of a move of this kind"
- His "spirit was not at rest day nor night"
- Joseph did not want to "profess godliness without its benign influence upon [his] heart"
- He also did not want to "unite with a society professing to be built upon the only sure foundation, and that profession be a vain one"
- Joseph Smith felt that there would be "serious consequences of moving hastily, in a course fraught with eternal realities"
- He believed that "amid so many [denominations], some must be built upon the sand"
- "In this situation where could he go?"
- Joseph spent time "reflecting" on a passage of scripture
- He had a strong "degree of determination . . . relative to obtaining a certainty of the things of God"
- (Messenger and Advocate, vol. 1, no. 3, December 1834, 42-43).
9 November 1835
- "being wrought up in my mind, respecting the subject of religion and looking at the different systems taught the children of men, I knew not who was right or who was wrong and I considered it of the first importance that I should be right, in matters that involve eternal consequ[e]nces; being thus perplexed in mind . . . . information was what I most desired at this time, and with a fixed determination to obtain it"
2 May 1838
- “multitudes united themselves to the different religious parties, which created no small stir and division among the people, Some crying, ‘Lo here’ and some ‘Lo there.’ Some were contending for the Methodist faith, Some for the Presbyterian, and some for the Baptist . . . . a scene of great confusion and bad feeling ensued; Priest contending against priest, and convert against convert . . . a strife of words and a contest about opinions”; “so great was the confusion and strife amongst the different denominations”; “the cry and tumult were so great and incessant. The Presbyterians were most decided against the Baptists and Methodists, and used all their powers of either reason or sophistry to prove their errors, or at least to make the people think they were in error. On the other hand the Baptists and Methodists in their turn were equally Zealous in endeavoring to establish their own tenets and disprove all others”; “war of words, and tumult of opinions”; “the contests of these parties of religionists”; “the teachers of religion of the different sects understood the same passage of scripture so differently as <to> destroy all confidence in settling the question by an appeal to the Bible.”
Conclusion
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