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== Life == | == Life == | ||
===Early years (1805–1827) {{WikipediaUpdate|3 | ===Early years (1805–1827) {{WikipediaUpdate|9/3/2011}}=== | ||
{{Main|Early life of Joseph Smith, Jr.}} | {{Main|Early life of Joseph Smith, Jr.}} | ||
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and eventually took a mortgage on a 100 acre farm in nearby [[Manchester (town), New York|Manchester town]]. | and eventually took a mortgage on a 100 acre [[Smith Family Farm|farm]] in nearby [[Manchester (town), New York|Manchester town]]. | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=32–33}}. From about 1818 until after the July 1820 purchase, the Smiths [[squatting|squatted]] in a [[log home]] adjacent to the property. ''Id.'' | *{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=32–33}}. From about 1818 until after the July 1820 purchase, the Smiths [[squatting|squatted]] in a [[log home]] adjacent to the property. ''Id.'' | ||
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|claim=Although the Smith family was caught up in this excitement, | |claim= | ||
Although the Smith family was caught up in this excitement, | |||
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*{{Harvtxt|Brooke|1994|p=129}} ("Long before the 1820s, the Smiths were caught up in the dialectic of spiritual mystery and secular fraud framed in the hostile symbiosis of divining and counterfeiting and in the diffusion of Masonic culture in an era of sectarian fervor and profound millenarian expectation."). | *{{Harvtxt|Brooke|1994|p=129}} ("Long before the 1820s, the Smiths were caught up in the dialectic of spiritual mystery and secular fraud framed in the hostile symbiosis of divining and counterfeiting and in the diffusion of Masonic culture in an era of sectarian fervor and profound millenarian expectation."). | ||
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*{{ | *{{WikipediaCITE|editor=COgden|wikipedialink=http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joseph_Smith&diff=341396046&oldid=341391231}}The citation used to support this assertion doesn't support the claim that the Smith family was caught up in "this excitement" of "religious enthusiasm," instead implying that the Smith family was associated with "divining and counterfeiting." The citation is mismatched to the assertion in the main body text. | ||
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|claim=they disagreed about religion. | |claim= | ||
they disagreed about religion. | |||
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*{{Harvtxt|Vogel|2004|p=xx}} (Smith family was "marked by religious conflict".); {{Harvtxt|Hill|1989|pp=10–11}} (noting "tension between [Smith's] mother and his father regarding religion"). | *{{Harvtxt|Vogel|2004|p=xx}} (Smith family was "marked by religious conflict".); {{Harvtxt|Hill|1989|pp=10–11}} (noting "tension between [Smith's] mother and his father regarding religion"). | ||
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Joseph Smith may not have joined a church in his youth, | Joseph Smith may not have joined a church in his youth, | ||
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*Smith said that he decided in 1820, based on his [[ | *Smith said that he decided in 1820, based on his [[First Vision]], not to join any churches {{Harv|Smith|Mulholland|Thompson|Phelps|Richards|1839–1843|p=4}}. However, {{Harv|Lapham|1870}} said that Smith's father told him his son had once become a [[Baptist]]). | ||
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a common practice | a common practice at the time. | ||
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*{{harvtxt|Quinn|1998|p=31}}; {{Harvtxt|Hill|1977|p=53}} ("Even the more vivid manifestations of religious experience, such as dreams, visions and revelations, were not uncommon in Joseph's day, neither were they generally viewed with scorn."). | *{{harvtxt|Quinn|1998|p=31}}; {{Harvtxt|Hill|1977|p=53}} ("Even the more vivid manifestations of religious experience, such as dreams, visions and revelations, were not uncommon in Joseph's day, neither were they generally viewed with scorn."). | ||
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Smith later said that he had his own [[ | Smith later said that he had his own [[First Vision|first vision]] in 1820, in which God told him his sins were forgiven | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Smith|1832}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=39}} (When Smith first described the vision twelve years after the event, "[h]e explained the vision as he must have first understood it, as a personal conversion".) | *{{Harvtxt|Smith|1832}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=39}} (When Smith first described the vision twelve years after the event, "[h]e explained the vision as he must have first understood it, as a personal conversion".) | ||
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and that all churches were false. | and that all the current churches were false. | ||
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*No source provided | *No source provided | ||
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likewise relatively common in contemporary [[New England]] though the practice was frequently condemned by clergymen and rationalists and was often illegal. | likewise relatively common in contemporary [[New England]] | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Newell|Avery|1994|pp=16}}("Money digging, or treasure hunting, was widespread among the rural areas of New York and New England as well as the area of Pennsylvania near the Hales'.") | |||
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though the practice was frequently condemned by clergymen and rationalists and was often illegal. | |||
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*{{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp=25–26, 30}}. "Despite the fact that folk magic had widespread manifestations in early America, the biases of the Protestant Reformation and Age of Reason dominated the society's responses to folk magic. The most obvious effect was that every American colony (and later U.S. state) had laws against various forms of divination." (30) | *{{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp=25–26, 30}}. "Despite the fact that folk magic had widespread manifestations in early America, the biases of the Protestant Reformation and Age of Reason dominated the society's responses to folk magic. The most obvious effect was that every American colony (and later U.S. state) had laws against various forms of divination." (30) | ||
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*{{SeeCriticalWork|author=D. Michael Quinn|work=Early Mormonism and the Magic World View}} | *{{SeeCriticalWork|author=D. Michael Quinn|work=Early Mormonism and the Magic World View}} | ||
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During the next four years, Smith made annual visits to | During the next four years, Smith made annual visits to the hill, only to return without the plates because he claimed that he had not brought with him the right person required by the angel. | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp=163–64}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=54}} (noting accounts stating that the "right person" was originally Smith's brother Alvin, then when he died, someone else, and finally his wife Emma). | *{{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp=163–64}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=54}} (noting accounts stating that the "right person" was originally Smith's brother Alvin, then when he died, someone else, and finally his wife Emma). | ||
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Stories circulated of a requirement to bring Alvin to the hill to get the plates; and when he died, someone else. Emma, it was said, was designated as a key. The stories have a magical flavor, but other stories have the angel warning Joseph about greed and the evildoings of the money-diggers, as if the messenger was moving him away from his treasure-hunting ways. | Stories circulated of a requirement to bring Alvin to the hill to get the plates; and when he died, someone else. Emma, it was said, was designated as a key. The stories have a magical flavor, but other stories have the angel warning Joseph about greed and the evildoings of the money-diggers, as if the messenger was moving him away from his treasure-hunting ways. | ||
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Meanwhile, Smith continued traveling western New York and Pennsylvania as a treasure seeker and also as a farmhand. | Meanwhile, Smith continued traveling western New York and Pennsylvania as a treasure seeker and also as a farmhand. | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=47–53}}; {{Harvtxt|Newell|Avery|1994|pp=17}}; {{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp= | *{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=47–53}}; {{Harvtxt|Newell|Avery|1994|pp=17}}; {{Harvtxt|Quinn|1998|pp=54–57}} | ||
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*{{Detail|Joseph Smith/Money digging}} | *{{Detail|Joseph Smith/Money digging}} | ||
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In 1826, he was tried in [[Chenango County, New York|Chenango County]], New York, for the crime of pretending to find lost treasure. | In 1826, he was tried in [[Chenango County, New York|Chenango County]], New York, for "glass-looking," the crime of pretending to find lost treasure. | ||
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*{{Harvtxt|Hill|1977|pp=1–2}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=51–52}}; {{Citation|title=Revised Statutes of the State of New York|volume=1|year=1829|publication-place=Albany, NY|publisher=Packard and Van Benthuysen|page=638: part I, title 5, § 1|url=http://books.google.com/?id=RX84AAAAIAAJ&pg=RA1-PA638|author1=(state), New York|author2=Butler, Benjamin Franklin|author3=Spencer, John Canfield}} ("[A]ll persons pretending to tell fortunes, or where lost or stolen goods may be found,...shall be deemed [[vagrancy (people)|disorderly persons]].") | *{{Harvtxt|Hill|1977|pp=1–2}}; {{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|pp=51–52}}; {{Citation|title=Revised Statutes of the State of New York|volume=1|year=1829|publication-place=Albany, NY|publisher=Packard and Van Benthuysen|page=638: part I, title 5, § 1|url=http://books.google.com/?id=RX84AAAAIAAJ&pg=RA1-PA638|author1=(state), New York|author2=Butler, Benjamin Franklin|author3=Spencer, John Canfield}} ("[A]ll persons pretending to tell fortunes, or where lost or stolen goods may be found,...shall be deemed [[vagrancy (people)|disorderly persons]].") | ||
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While boarding at the Hale house in Harmony, he met [[Emma Hale Smith|Emma Hale]] and, on January 18, 1827, eloped with her because her parents disapproved of his treasure hunting. | |||
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*{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=53}}. | *{{Harvtxt|Bushman|2005|p=53}}. |
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—Editor "John Foxe," 13 January 2009 off-site
I think Smith is handled with kid gloves in this article. There needs to be more emphasis on the fraudulent means that he used to start his religion and also the emphasis on sex at the end of his life.
—Editor "John Foxe," posting using his banned sockpuppet "Hi540," 13 January 2009 off-site
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